What was the first writing advice you were ever given

Truthfully, I don’t remember who gave me my first writing advice or what advice was offered but the first piece of advice that stands out came from a chap called Frank Littlewood, a tutor at Richmond College in Sheffield where I did my journalism training. Frank was a plump former Yorkshire Post sub-editor, who always wore a grubby knitted yellow waistcoat, and was absolutely passionate about good writing and correct spelling and grammar.

He could be a bit long-winded sometimes but he knew his trade and every rookie reporter who sat in his classroom learned a lot from him. I can see him now, in that virulently-coloured waistcoat, wagging a finger and telling us: ‘News is people.’ In other words, stories are about people and what happens to them and why? That applies to novelists just as much as journalists: good characters matter and it doesn’t matter whether readers love them or hate them so long as they want to read about them.

 

What was the most recent writing advice you’ve been given?

That’s easy: show don’t tell.

Easy to say, not so easy to do but the trick which I’ve learned from Rebecca Carpenter, my copy editor at Lakewater Press, is to replace what she calls ‘weak’ verbs with ‘strong’ ones that paint word pictures creating heightened mood and tension.

What’s a weak verb? A really good example is the word ‘looked’, which it is really easy to overuse. For example, consider this sentence: Sally looked at her father. Here ‘looked’ is a weak verb because it tells the reader nothing about the scene or Sally’s mood or her relationship with her dad. But, replace ‘looked’ with a stronger, more descriptive verb, such as peeked, and the scene comes alive because the writer shows the reader how Sally is feeling – clearly she is apprehensive or afraid.

Think about it: Sally peeked at her father. You could change the mood again by using a different word: Sally stared at her father. This time, it’s obvious Sally is surprised or incredulous. It’s a small change but so effective.

 

What is the piece of advice you’d most like to pass on?

Oh dear! This is a really hard question because there are so many pieces of advice I’d like to pass on. These include: the harder I work, the luckier I get, which has been attributed to, amongst others former US president Thomas Jefferson and movie mogul Samuel Goldwyn.

I’ve also learned that achieving your dreams is a marathon and not a sprint and that your first job may not be your dream job but it will be good preparation for the dream job.

However, if pushed, the one piece of advice that has helped me in both my personal and professional life is: treat others as you’d want them to treat you. So be polite and considerate and don’t take advantage of other people. Never say something behind someone’s back you wouldn’t say to their face and if you make a mistake, apologise and move on. And never try and attribute blame. Mistakes happen, learn from them.

 

Sue Featherstone is a former journalist and public relations practitioner turned academic then author. Together with her friend and writing partner Susan Pape, she has written two successful journalism text books and their first novel, A Falling Friend, was published by Lakewater Press in 2016 and a sequel A Forsaken Friend is published on March 21, 2018.

They now write about books at https://bookloversbooklist.com/